Sunday, 28 December 2008

HELLO GUV'NOR


It was a dark and windy night. I saw a shadow by a window. There was something there. It had a big grey face but it was not a person. It said two words “HELLO GUV'NOR”!!!
I was so scared I ran home as fast as a rocket. I went into my house and to my horror I saw the creature in front of me in the hall. To my surprise when I looked at it I could see right though it and then I thought this must be a GHOST!
It looked at me and said “HELLO GUV'NOR” . When it said this I felt very weak. “HELLO GUV'NOR”, “HELLO GUV'NOR”, “HELLO GUV'NOR”, “HELLO GUV'NOR”.
When it had said these words five times I gasped my last breath and fell to the floor and then I was gone from this world.
And now I am a ghost and someday I might visit and pop in to say HELLO to you!....
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2 comments:

  1. fustar29 December 2008 at 07:40

    That's even scarier than the last one! Great stuff Hannah. Let's have some more. x

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  2. aunty aunty2 January 2009 at 09:23

    Thats a great story, I am spooked though! Am now checking under my bed for ghosts....yikes i hear a reply ..hello guv'nor!!

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